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Band 2

You attended a conference and notice that a speaker gave incorrect information. -say what was the mistake -how it influenced the presentation -suggest a way to correct it

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Dear Sir or Madam I am writing in order to complain about
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the
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 I encountered with the presentation during the conference on
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 topic since the speaker provided
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incurred
incorrect
 information regarding the
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 work as a research assistant in the field of environmental science, and I am very familiar with the topic discussed.First of all, I am afraid to
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 that I have a number of
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complaints
 relating to the accuracy of the data presented.
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 significant error may have misled many
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attendees
 who are not specialists in the field.
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, I would
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grateful
 if you could solve the
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constructively
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, I would appreciate your effort if you could
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. I hope you
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 take into consideration my
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complaints
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, I
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 need to get
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 apology for the
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inconvenience
 above. I
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 forward to your reply and a resolution to my
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. Yours faithfully. Steve Jobs.

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task achievement
Ensure that all parts of the task are addressed clearly. In your essay, the central issue of the incorrect information was not explicitly stated. Present the error clearly at the beginning, outlining the specific mistake and its implications.
coherence and cohesion
While your essay generally follows the structure of a letter, improving the logical flow would help. Consider clearly indicating the problem, the impact of that problem, and your suggestion in a more structured manner.
coherence and cohesion
Proofread your work for spelling and grammatical errors, as these detract from the overall clarity. For example, 'incorred' should be 'incorrect' and 'comlaints' should be 'complaints'.
strength
Your intention to address an important issue is commendable, and you have a respectful tone throughout the letter.

Fully explain your ideas

To get an excellent score in the IELTS Task 2 writing section, one of the easiest and most effective tips is structuring your writing in the most solid format. A great argument essay structure may be divided to four paragraphs, in which comprises of four sentences (excluding the conclusion paragraph, which comprises of three sentences).

For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

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