The diagram below shows how olive olis is manufactured.

The diagram below shows how olive olis is manufactured.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The diagram below shows how olive olis is manufactured.
The diagram illustrates the way how they make olive oils. Over
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apply
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all
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all,
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it is clear that
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olive oils
under go
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undergo
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6 steps prior, they
dilver
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deliver
to
the
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apply
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storage.
To begin
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withe
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with
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the first phase it
to
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is to
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picking
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pick
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olives from the plant. once they
collected
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are collected
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come
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comes
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the
seconde
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second
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stipe which, is
rinsing it
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rinsed
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in cold water.
Then
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they need to
smas
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smash
it and, replace
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it to
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to
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with
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olive paste and olive stone but, before that olives need to belt first
then
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, smashing. After making olives paste and stone
olive
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olives
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will
collects
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collect
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in
bag
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a bag
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withe
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with
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holes. Subsequent come two stages pressing the product and
sparated
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separated
. the products will come
two
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in two
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the
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apply
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storage and two shapes
as
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apply
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water and
oli
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oil
.
Finally
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saleing
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selling
it.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 2 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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