The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram below illustrates the changed floor plan of a public library now and two decades ago.
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, except for the altered location of some infrastructure, the tables and chairs in the
center
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of the main area have been removed. On the one hand, the main entrance is still the same, but the reading
room
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that contained newspapers and magazines, and the enquiry desk that used to sell tickets and handle book returns, have now been replaced by a computer
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and a café.
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, the section for adult fiction books has been moved to the right, near the newly built information desk, and its original place now contains all the reference books. It is notable that three self-service machines have been added in front of the café. Walking
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along the path, there is a
room
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on the right for children's fiction books, which contains some basic settings including two sofas and a storytelling area.
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, a new lecture
room
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is next to it, and the area for computer games, CDs, and videos has been permanently removed from the plan.

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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words room with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • floor plan
  • public library
  • layout
  • reading area
  • computer station
  • multimedia section
  • children's area
  • reference section
  • study cubicles
  • shelving units
  • digital media
  • technological advancements
  • user behavior
  • accessibility
  • traffic flow
  • modernization
  • community needs
  • conversion
  • allocation
  • removal
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