The supplied bar chart represents data about females in different age that gave a birth to the first child in Australia in the year 1966, 1986 and 2006. Assel

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The data representation about females in different age groups to the first child in Australia in the
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1966, 1986 and 2006.
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, information about when Australian women
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first childbirth in percentages of various ages, with the socio-economic factors influencing these trends. Analysis of peak age groups for each year and reasons in the report shows a clear trend towards later motherhood in Australia. In 1966,
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mothers 20-24 reached a peak
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60%,
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the most common group was 20-25, with just under 40%,
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women aged 30-34 and older had a much smaller proportion. Interestingly, 35% of girls aged 19 and under
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gave birth during that year. The trend had begun to shift from quantity to quality in 1986. Females 25-39 having their first baby increased over 50%, and 30-34 around 20%,
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35-39 went up to 10%,
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down about 39%, 19 and under dropped to 20%. By 2006, the most common age group for first-time births was 30-34, with a percentage exceeding 50%. The figures for younger women (under 25) dropped significantly, especially those under 20, whose percentage fell to nearly 10%. The proportion of first-time mothers aged 30-39 and even 40+
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saw gradual increases.

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