The bar chart illustrates the percentage of how parents in a country spent time taking care their children in the evening in 2022. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart illustrates the percentage of how parents in a country spent time taking care their children in the evening in 2022. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The bar chart illustrates the percentage of how parents in a country spent time taking care their children in the evening in 2022. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The present graph demonstrates the degree of participation of a parent alone or a mother and father together in the
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evening routine of their child. The units are measured in percentage of time.
Overall
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it is clear that
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fathers join caring activities significantly less often than mothers, regardless of the type of activity.
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, in half of the cases both parents,
instead
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of alone, participate in the life of a child. Beginning from the dressing and the homework routine, mothers spend dramatically more time, comprising around 75% and 50% respectively,
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fathers comprised only around 3% and 10%.
By contrast
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, playing games and preparing for sleeping children requires the involvement of both parents more frequently than one by one.
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, mothers help their child fall asleep almost as often as parents together and made up about 42% and 50% respectively.
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the whole family often spends time together in
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a pastime, the participation of fathers alone remains markedly low.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "percentage" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • bar chart
  • Percentage
  • Parents
  • Spent time
  • Taking care
  • Children
  • Evening
  • 2022
  • Summarise
  • Information
  • Main features
  • Comparisons
  • Relevant
  • Patterns
  • Trends
  • Highest
  • Lowest
  • Activities
  • Gender
  • Conclusion
  • Findings
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