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The table below shows the production of milk annually in four countries in 1990, 2000 and 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below shows the production of milk annually in four countries in 1990, 2000 and 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The table chart provides key information about milk
production
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 annually in four countries for 1990, 2000, and 2010. the data is expressed as numbers of litres.
Overall
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, it is clear from the table that the Netherlands had the highest
production
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 amount.
In addition
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, Guatemala showed the lowest rate.
Whereas
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, Australia was generally higher than Tanzania.
According to
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 what is shown, the Netherlands was the
most higher
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highest
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 method in amount of
production
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, recorded
as
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at
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 11,262,000 in 1990 and rose
up
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apply
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to 11,466,000 in 2010. Australia became the second method where it rated about 11,246,000 in 1990 and
conversely
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 declined to 9,165,000 in 2010. Tanzania recorded 87,000 in amount of
production
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 in 1990 and rose steadily to around 1,55,000 in 2010. Guatemala had the lowest rate in 1990 with about 26,000 and shifted up to 84,000 in 2010. the graph
hilghlights
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highlights
 a clear trend: the
production
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 of milk annually
occur
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occurs
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 in
a
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apply
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higher amounts in certain countries. The Netherlands,
in particular
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, stood out with
a
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the
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 significantly highest rates.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 75%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words production with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 3 times.
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