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The table below shows the production of milk annually in four countries in 1990, 2000 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the man features and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below shows the production of milk annually in four countries in 1990, 2000 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the man features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The table provides data about the annual
milk
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 production in four different countries in 1990,2000 and 2010.
Overall
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, in 2010, the amount of
milk
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 produced in litres was the greatest in all the four countries.
In addition
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, over the three years,
Netherlands
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the Netherlands
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 processed more
milk
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 than the rest of the nations
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, Tanzania and Guatemala maintained a positive trend in their production.
To begin
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 with, Tanzania and
Guatemala
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Guatemala's
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 production capabilities progressively rose over the years reaching their peaks at 155,000 and 84,000 litres in 2010 respectively which was nearly two-fold of their initial quantities in 1990,
although
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, Tanzania had surpassed Guatemala during the three years.
On the other hand
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, Australia saw a substantial decline from 1990 until
it's
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its
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 lowest record at more than 9 million in 2010.
However
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,
Netherlands
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the Netherlands
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 experienced a fluctuation in the quantity of
milk
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 processed from 1990 to 2000 before reaching its maximum scale
at
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of
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 more than
11.4million
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11.4 million
 litres.

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