The charts below show the proportion of people’s total spending in a particular European country was spent on different commodities and services in 1958 and in 2008. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main featureand make comparisons where relevant

A glance at the figures given illustrates the proportion of citizen's total spending in a

spesific

Correct your spelling

specific

European country on different areas in commodities and services in 1958 and 2008. Based on an

overall

Linking Words

perspective, it can

bee

Correct your spelling

be

show examples

seen that there were many changes in citizen allocations for their lifestyles,

for

Linking Words

instance

Add the comma(s)

instance,

show examples

the highest expense in 1958 was clothing,

while

Linking Words

housing

expense

Fix the agreement mistake

expenses

show examples

in 2008. From an initial figure, in 1958, clothing attained the first place at 32%. The following positions were housing at 22%, entertainment at 18%, travel/ transportation at 13%, food at 8%, and luxury goods at 7%, respectively.

Moreover

Linking Words

, in 2008, accommodation obtained the first spot at 32%. The second places were expensive items and meals, both of them at the same percentage which was 17%. The subsequent places were fun expenses at 16%, wardrobe expenses at 12%,

commuting

Correct word choice

and commuting

show examples

fees at 6%, respectively.

To sum up

Linking Words

, there was an incremental spending in housing by 10% from 1958 to 2008.

Furthermore

Linking Words

, there was a decrease in clothes spending by 10% from 1958 to 2008.