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You would like to apply for a full-time position at an international airport. Write to the human resource department and say. -What job you are interested in -Explain what you are currently doing -Why do you think you are best candidate for the job

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Dear Sir/Madam I hope
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yor
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 well,I am Pooja,
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practicing
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 Lawyer residing at anna nagar,
chennai
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Chennai
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, thirumangalam, which is a prominent landmark in the city.
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 have been living in
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 area for several years. I am applying for the post of Legal adviser in your company.With my background
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: 10 years of
experence
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experience
 in company law ,service law,and international law,which would be helpful for your company.I
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belive
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, I am well suited for
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 opportunity.I am
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 confident my
experence
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experience
 will be well suited for
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 opportunity. I have enclosed my resume for your consideration. I would be
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grateful
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grateful
, for
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 opportunity to
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discuss
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discuss
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further
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 interview Thank you Yours Sincerely R.POOJA

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coherence and cohesion
Ensure that each paragraph focuses on a single key idea. This will improve clarity and coherence.
task achievement
There are some spelling and grammatical errors. Take time to proofread your letter before submission.
task achievement
Make sure to use appropriate formal language and punctuation to enhance the overall tone of your letter.
task achievement
You clearly stated the position you are applying for, which demonstrates task response.
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The inclusion of your years of experience shows commitment and suitability for the role, which strengthens your application.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • international airport
  • human resources
  • customer service
  • baggage handler
  • candidate
  • qualifications
  • experience
  • interpersonal skills
  • aviation management
  • full-time position
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