The maps bellow show changes experienced bt the town of Lakeside at the beginning of the 21st centuries. Summarize the information by reporting the main feature, and make comparisons where relevant. (Duc)

IELTS Writing Task Chart for The maps bellow show changes experienced bt the town of Lakeside at the beginning of the 21st centuries. Summarize the information by reporting the main feature, and make comparisons where relevant. (Duc)

The maps describe the alteration of Lakeside from 2000 to 2009.

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this

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rural region was modernized, cut

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off

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the natural habitat and removed some residential areas

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developed

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developing

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more infrastructure for

citizen

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citizens

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. Looking

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the maps more specifically, the citizen accommodation in the north-west area

was remained

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remained

has remained

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while

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the derelic

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derelic

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derelict

warehouse next to that gave way for a new car park. Going closer to the middle of the town, the old town was separated to construct an office and a university.

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, the art centre to the west was replaced by a cinema

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the school nearby was kept.

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, there was the replacement of

residential

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a residential

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place

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the west side for a shopping centre. In the south-east area, the citizen place was removed to upgrade a bigger industrial complex park.

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but not least, the lake to the east was cut off into a smaller pond.

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Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 2 times.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

150 words

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The maps bellow show changes experienced bt the town of Lakeside at the beginning of the 21st centuries. Summarize the information by reporting the main feature, and make comparisons where relevant. (Duc)

Some museums and art galleries charge admission fees, while others offer free entry. In my opinion, the benefits of free admission outweigh the drawbacks.

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Economic growth in recent years made some people in both developed countries and developing countries are richer. However, research shows that while people in developing countries are happier, people in developed countries seem not happier than before. What does this happen?