The pie charts show the size of classes in primary schools in four states in Australia in 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. The pie charts show the size of classes in primary schools in four states in Australia in 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The given pie charts illustrate data about the proportion of class sizes in junior schools among four Australian states in 2010 which is divided into four categories based on the number of admissions.
Overall
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, The most widespread class type is the one including 21-25 students
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the class having more than 30 learners is the least common one.
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the images, In New South Wales and Western
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, the pie 20 students or fewer showed the same proportion which was 26 per cent
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in
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part and Capital Territory, the result was similar being around 36 per cent gaining the second most popular in all regions except for Southern one where it reached superiority. At the same time, 26-30 student classes stayed at approximately a third fraction in all states apart from
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Capital Territory where it displayed only ten percent. Importantly, classes containing 21 to 25 students were the most prominent phenomenon in
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Capital Territory which was just over a half simultaneously it achieved the highest results in New South Wales (37 %) and Western urban area (42 %).
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, groups with more than 30 pupils demonstrated 5 or lower than 5 per cent in all regions.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • primary school
  • class size
  • proportion
  • average
  • trends
  • small/medium/large classes
  • implications
  • quality of education
  • teacher workload
  • comparison
  • variance
  • state-by-state analysis
  • education policy
  • statistical representation
  • pie chart interpretation
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