A friend from another country is moving to your city for work. He / she has asked you for advice about living in your city. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter suggest an interesting part of the city to live in describe the public transport in your city say how your friend can meet new people there

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Dear Mohammed,

Couples

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of days ago I

have

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apply

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heard that's you are coming to our

city

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for work and you asked for my

advices

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advice

pieces of advice

bits of advice

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,don'

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worry my friend I gonna explain

every thing

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everything

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to you ,we are living in a

lovley

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lovely

town with quite

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a atmosipher

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atmosipher

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atmosphere

atmospheric

especially in summer

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apply

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If you

arraived

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arrived

I will take you from the airport to

downtawon

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downtown

which is the best you can

vist

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visit

and you will be able to discover the

city

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throghout

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throughout

the

musems

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museums

and the street art

such

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as the painted

buliding

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building

buildings

. the main transportation in our

city

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taxi ,sorry

for hearing

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that but we don'

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have metros because it's a tiny

city

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but don'

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concern taxies

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are

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sheaper

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cheaper

than

your

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in your

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previous town ,I

haigly

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highly

recomanded

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recommend

you

vist

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visit

these

placecs

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places

,The coastline where you can

whtch

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watch

the nice sunset in

it's

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its

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11km from the downtown,the

libary

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library

where you can find good people to form new

releationships

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relationships

with them ,

also

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don'

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forget to fog in the park where you can spend

laiisure

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leisure

time and breath

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apply

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clean air.

To sum up

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,I will assure

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you thats

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thats

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that

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Linking words
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2
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
35
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

214 words

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