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The table below gives information on households with a regular use of a car in Great Britain from 1971 to 2007.

The table below gives information on households with a regular use of a car in Great Britain from 1971 to 2007.
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The line graph provides
date
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data
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 on
households
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 with
typically
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typical
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 use of a
car
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 in Great Britain between 1971 and 2007.
It is clear that
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,
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 the percentages of
households
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 with a regular use of a
car
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 and without
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car
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a car
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 have a period of significantly reduced from 1971 to 2007.
Likewise
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, more
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then
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than
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 two cars saw a minority increase over the period. It can be seen from the graph,
in
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that in
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 1971
a
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the
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 number of
no
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apply
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car
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cars
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 was nearly
a
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half and began falling year by year.
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, compared with others it was the highest percentage of
households
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 in Great Britain.
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, with a
car
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 was around 45 per
cent
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 in the beginning and it saw a
leveling
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levelling
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 out over the period. If it comes to the two cars had approximately 10 per
cent
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 in the beginning and it experienced
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a significantly
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significantly
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significant
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 increase from 1971 to 2007.
While
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,
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apply
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 more
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then
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than
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 three cars of
households
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 proportion started slightly growing from nearly 1 per
cent
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 to about 7 per
cent
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 over the span.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words households, car, cent with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "significantly" was used 2 times.
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