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The graph below shows the number of enquiries received by the Tourist Information Office in one city over a six-month period in 2011. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. (Line graph)

The graph below shows the number of enquiries received by the Tourist Information Office in one city over a six-month period in 2011. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. (Line graph)
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The line chart illustrates the range of enquiries to
traveller
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the traveller
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 data office by telephone, letter or electronic mail, and
in person
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in-person
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 from January to June
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2011.
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,
although
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, the count of exploration received through telephone and personally rose steadily throughout the year
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a
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the
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 opposite trend was observed in emails/ paper letters.
According to
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 the data, in 2011, more than 400 people visited
tourism
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the tourism
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 information centre for enquiries in the month of January, the number doubled in the next 2 months and in April accounted for more than 1200 after that it kept sharply rising to about 1900 till June.
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, information asked via letter or emails
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,
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 accounted for just below 800
then
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 slightly declined to 700 (in March).
Moreover
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, a dramatic drop was observed in the following 60 days before the count remained stable at less than 400.
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, 900 questions were received by phone in January shortly after a decrease of 100 was
showed
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 in the next month
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then
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 the number soared to 1000 in March. From the month March to April the count remained steady
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 was followed by a sharp incline until June which was to 1600.

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Vocabulary: The word "data" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "information" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
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