The maps below show a science park in 2008 and the same park today

The maps illustrate how a science

park

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has changed with the development of various accommodations for visitors from 2008 to today

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, there have been noticeable differences in roads and woodland. new buildings have

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been replaced with old ones which have been removed moving to a more detailed analysis,

although

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there has not been deforestation, the grassland in the west of the

park

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has been knocked out to make way for research and development building. a new cycle path lies along the road for people and in the east of the

park

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, near the road, a bus stop has been located.

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, the reception has

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been converted to a university hub for learners in the northwest of the

park

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With regard to the south part of the

park

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, the railway has maintained its place but a new station has been constructed in the middle of the railway, which is connected to the car

park

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via a footpath. the area of cyber security has grown,

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a new innovation centre has been built in the location of the old IT centre.

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The maps below show a science park in 2008 and the same park today

Some people think one should stay all their life in the same job, whereas others advocate changing jobs from time to time. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Space exploration is a costly project. The money would be much better spent on reducing social problems. To what extent do you agree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience

Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business, and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely.

Some university students want to learn about other subjects in addition to their main subjects. Others believe it is more important to give all their time and attention to studying for a qualification. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

Nowadays many people choose to be self-employed, rather than to work for a company or organization. Why might this be the case? What could be the disadvantages of being self- employed?