Some people think that in order to solve traffic and transportation problems, people should be encouraged to live in cities rather than in suburbs or in the country side. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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What works well

task achievement

You have presented your opinion clearly, which is a critical part of the task.

Improvement Suggestions

task achievement

Your essay has a clear stance, but it needs to develop a more balanced argument. Consider discussing both the advantages and disadvantages of living in cities versus suburbs, which will enhance your discussion.

coherence and cohesion

Ensure that you proofread your essay for spelling and grammatical errors. For example, 'suburbs' should not have a 'b' in 'sburbs', and 'firmely' should be 'firmly'. Such errors can affect clarity.

coherence and cohesion

Use transitional phrases to improve the flow of your essay. For instance, you could use phrases like 'on the other hand', 'in addition', or 'for example' to connect ideas more clearly and enhance coherence.

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

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Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

1 paragraphs

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Topic Vocabulary:

urbanization
public transportation
urban sprawl
commuting
infrastructure
congestion
affordability
amenities
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Some people think that in order to solve traffic and transportation problems, people should be encouraged to live in cities rather than in suburbs or in the country side. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Improvement Suggestions

Include an introduction and conclusion

Are there more advantages or disadvantages that many jobs done by people today will be done by robots in the future?

Wild Animals have no place in the 21st century, so protecting them is a waste of resources. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

some people think that employers should not care about the way their employees dress, because what matters is the quality of their work. to what extent do you agree or disagree?

In the future, nobody will buy printed newspaper or books because the will able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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