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As the internet becomes more popular, newspapers are becoming a thing of the past. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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There is no denying the fact that the internet has control
on
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 the world.
While
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 it is a commonly held belief that
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newspapers
 are not favourable any more for the readers after the
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internet
 using expanded, there is
also
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 an argument that
apposes
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 it. In my opinion, I consider that with the
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internet
 development
people
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 no longer buying
a
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newspapers
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newspapers
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.
To begin
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 with, the internet
offering
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offers
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 an
enermous
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enormous
 of different
newspappers
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newspapers
 for free.
In addition
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, these
charachteristic
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characteristic
characteristics
giving
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 users
a
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 freedom to read the
news
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in
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at
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 any time.
For example
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, many
newspapers
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 now
sharing
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 the
news
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 as a pdf file on
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their
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 website, which can be downloaded on the phone,
Therefore
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, it is
easir
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easier
easy
 for readers to take the
newspapers
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 file
any where
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 without taking a space or cost
a
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money,
while
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newspapers
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 need to bought and carried. Another point to consider, before the internet
people
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have
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 to wait the
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newspapers sale
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 to see the
news
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,
whereas
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currently
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currently,
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 it is spreading fastly. It is
also
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 possible to say that websites and social media
is
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 the fastest way to spread
news
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.
Moreover
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, many websites now show that there is no benefit to
buy
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buying
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newspapere
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newspaper
newspapers
 after the
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spread
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spreads
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 on the
interenet
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Internet
.
For instance
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, a famous website like BBC now spreads
a
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news
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 every day on different topics after a
moments
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 from the things happen, but
newspapers
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 need time to write and print. In conclusion, despite
people
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 having different views, I believe that
people
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relying
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rely
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 on the
interent
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Internet
 to see
news
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 rather than
bought
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buy
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a
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newspapers
a newspaper
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newspapers
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becuase
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because
 it is no charge and fast
on
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apply
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spreads.

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task achievement
Ensure the introduction clearly states your position and outlines the main points you will discuss.
coherence cohesion
Check for spelling mistakes (e.g., 'newspapers', 'internet', 'characteristic', 'easier', 'because', 'newspaper') to maintain clarity.
coherence cohesion
Make sure to phrase sentences clearly to enhance meaning (e.g., 'the internet offers an enormous variety of newspapers for free').
task achievement
You presented a clear viewpoint and provided examples to support your argument.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Access
  • Convenient
  • Fast
  • Expensive
  • Wider range
  • News sources
  • Perspectives
  • Readership
  • Demographics
  • Physical
  • Tangible
  • Reading experience
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