The bar chart and line graph give information about participants who have entered the Olympics since it began. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar and line graph illustrate the information about the

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of individuals of both genders

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in the Olympic games from 1924 to 2012.

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, the rate of athletes increased rapidly over the period of 88 years.

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there were more male athletes every year , the

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of females rose significantly after 1984.

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the bar chart,

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, 3000 men participated in the Olympic games which

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surged to 4500 in 1952.

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, in the next 30 years, the ratio jumped to 5100 participants approximately and kept rising until it

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its peach in 2012 ( just below 6000).

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, in 1924, the

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of women athletes was almost negligible after 1950, more females started participating in sports and accounted for 500 in 1952 and 1500 in 1984.

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, till 2012, the

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soared dramatically to 4900.

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, the line graph shows the trend of total participants in the Olympics. In 1924, the

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was less than 4000 shortly after, it sharply inclined to 6100 in the following 60 years. Again, from 1984 to 2012, the

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of participants represent a drastic growth

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4000(just above 10000).