Online courses have been welcomed as a great opportunity by many students, other students see these courses as a poor substitute for classroom teaching. What are the advantages and disadvantages of studying an online course?

Some pupils assume that

having

Unnecessary verb

apply

show examples

online studying could be more

convenience

Replace the word

convenient

show examples

,

Linking Words

however

Add a comma

however,

show examples

others think that it can not be an exact alternative

of

Change preposition

to

show examples

online courses. I will elaborate

the

Change preposition

on the

show examples

reasons behind the potential values and the

drwabacks

Correct your spelling

drawbacks

of

this

Linking Words

topic. Nowadays, the sense of offline studying can not be substituted by

the

Correct article usage

apply

show examples

virtual learning. Most pupils consider the

existance

Correct your spelling

existence

of

teacher

Fix the agreement mistake

teachers

show examples

and friends

are

Change the verb form

to be

show examples

really important

the

Change preposition

to the

show examples

vibes of struggling to reach knowledge together. These could be reasons

of

Change preposition

apply

show examples

why they prefer to have lessons in

classroom

Add an article

the classroom

show examples

.

However

Linking Words

, the lack of technology

skill

Fix the agreement mistake

skills

show examples

could

also

Linking Words

be

the

Correct article usage

an

show examples

obstacle in

teaching

Correct article usage

the teaching

show examples

and learning process through online

meeting

Fix the agreement mistake

meetings

show examples

.

On the other hand

Linking Words

, some people think there are benefits that they would gain

in

Change preposition

from

show examples

having virtual courses. Studying online could be a good choice

of

Change preposition

for

show examples

some scholars who are

concern

Wrong verb form

concerned

show examples

more about time and money. Those individuals tend to have online lessons because of the ease

in

Change preposition

of

show examples

arranging

the

Change the word

their

show examples

schedules.

Moreover

Linking Words

, if they live in a big city

such

Linking Words

as Jakarta, they might spend hours

in

Change preposition

apply

show examples

reaching one to

another locations

Replace the adjective

another location

other locations

show examples

. As

the

Correct article usage

a

show examples

results

Fix the agreement mistake

result

show examples

,

by

Change preposition

apply

show examples

providing

themselves

Correct pronoun usage

them

show examples

with

a

Correct article usage

apply

show examples

virtual studying means they can save more time and transportation

cost

Fix the agreement mistake

costs

show examples

. In

constrast

Correct your spelling

contrast

, virtual learning might realize bad impacts

such

Linking Words

as health. To illustrate

this

Linking Words

, students who are receiving insights through online courses in hours might cause the

eyes'

Change noun form

eyes

show examples

medical issues.

Furthermore

Linking Words

, they can easily be attacked by

headache

Fix the agreement mistake

headaches

show examples

,

due to

Linking Words

the hard thinking pressure and being radiated. In conclusion, virtual studying can be a wise choice

of

Change preposition

for

show examples

some students who

Add a missing verb

are concerns

show examples

concerns

Replace the word

concerned

show examples

more about time scheduling and money.

However

Linking Words

, there are

also

Linking Words

some negative sides that can be considered in conducting that way,

such

Linking Words

as medical issues including the

eyes'

Change noun form

eyes

show examples

problems and

headache

Fix the agreement mistake

headaches

show examples

.