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The chart shows the average number of hours each day that Chinese, American, Turkish and Brazilian tourists spent doing leisure activities while on holiday in Greece in August 2019.

The chart shows the average number of hours each day that Chinese, American, Turkish and Brazilian tourists spent doing leisure activities while on holiday in Greece in August 2019.
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The bar chart illustrates the proportion of the average
hours
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 per day which people from four different countries spent for their leisure activities
while
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 they were on a vacation in August 2019.
Overall
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, it can be clearly seen that
while
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Turkish
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 and Brazilian visitors tended to enjoy staying at the beach the most,
Chinese
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 and American travellers preferred reading books over the remaining activities. As for spending time at the beach, the average
number
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 of
hours
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 that Brazilian people spent was six
hours
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, which was twice the figure for
Chinese
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 tourists at three
hours
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.
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,
Turkish
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 visitors spent five
hours
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, with only one hour gap between American residents. Regarding reading books, the average
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 of
hours
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Chinese
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 visitors spent was eight
hours
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, which was the highest figure and kept the top position of all aspects.
This
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number
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 was
also
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 the total of that of
Turkish
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 and Brazilian.
In addition
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, we can
also
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 see that the activity, visiting places, was the least popular and the highest
number
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 was just three for American and
Turkish
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 tourists.
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,
Chinese
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 people spent much less time on visiting places than the other nationalities, with only one hour.

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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 65%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words hours, turkish, chinese, number with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • average number
  • leisure activities
  • tourists
  • nationalities
  • cultural trends
  • interests
  • vacation
  • influence
  • participation
  • impact
  • weather
  • events
  • festivals
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