People think that government should increase the cost of fuel for cars and other vehicles to solve environmental problems. Give your opinion.

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Globle

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Global

warnings are the epicentre of discussion nowadays in an international form. It is an irrefutable fact that

problems

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are rising day by day.

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some people think that the

government

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should increase the price of

fuel

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can solve these

enviornment

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environmental

environment

problems

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. I will shed some light on my viewpoint.

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essay shall discuss the actual

problem

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and its cause. On the one hand, the

government

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should not raise the price of

fuel

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/gas because the increased cost will eventually get to

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government

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the government

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but they are not taking any action regarding the environmental

problems

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Instead

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if prices are high the whole nation's citizens have to surf.

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, Dehli is one of the biggest and current examples of air

pollution

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. Even though, smoke in the air over there is harmful to every living creature on the earth. but the

government

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is not taking action

accordingly

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this

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, Dehli is the capital of India. One of the largest places in India.

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, Just increasing the cost of

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will not solve the

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then

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in contrast

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people will travel and use their vehicles for

traveling

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On the other hand

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, the environmental

problems

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are water

pollution

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, air

pollution

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, Noise

pollution

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, soil, fossil

fuel

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, cutting down the greenery and many more reasons. On another note,

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contrast

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the

government

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should do campaigning, and

also

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can do advertisements, it will significantly increase awareness among every individual it will lead to reducing the

problem

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in the long run.

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as not throwing plastic waste or any time of waste in water.

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, the Yamuna

river

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in India. Its water is getting polluted by industries throwing their wastewater in the river.

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, the

government

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should stop industries from ocean acidification. In conclusion, It is a very vital topic to discuss and in my

view

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view,

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the

government

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should not outpace the price of

fuel

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instead

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will not solve much.

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, the

government

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should do advertisements and campaigns to mitigate the

problems

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, educating individuals can reduce the

problem

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in the long run.

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grammar

Make sure to proofread your essay for minor grammatical errors and typos (e.g., 'Globle' should be 'Global', 'enviornment' should be 'environment').

structure

Consider using topic sentences that clearly state the main idea of each paragraph to help guide the reader.

content

Clarify your arguments further and make sure each point directly supports your overall opinion to enhance logical flow.

content

You provided a clear opinion and discussed alternative solutions to environmental issues, demonstrating critical thinking.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

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4 paragraphs

338 words

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