The system used for rubbish/garbage collection in your local area is not working properly. This is causing problems for you and your neighbours. Write a letter to the local council. In your letter: describe how the rubbish collection system is not working properly explain how this is affecting you and your neighbours suggest what should be done about the problem

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Dear

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, I am writing

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letter to inform you about the critical situation concerning the network of garbage collection. In our neighbourhood, the garbage is usually gets

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three times a day with

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of the government car.

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, recently the truck that gathers the garbage

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evening

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. Owing to the infrequent arrival of the truck plenty of people miss the opportunity to give out their bins. As

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result, several individuals are

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out litter beside the front gate of our building.

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malfunction is causing several problems.

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, if

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continues to happen various types of disease can spread in our society.

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, because of the litter at the entrance of the society, the smell will spread throughout the area. It would be really appreciated if you take

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situation

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and take immediate action. Hiring new staff could resolve the issue. Yours sincerely, Jojo

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Make sure to clearly describe the current schedule and frequency of garbage collection in your introduction for better understanding.

coherence and cohesion

Consider breaking up longer sentences to enhance readability and clarity, particularly in the second paragraph.

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Use more varied vocabulary to enhance your writing tone and to make it more engaging.

coherence and cohesion

You have a clear structure with an introduction, body paragraphs, and a conclusion.

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Your closing is polite and appropriate for a formal letter.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

155 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

rubbish collection schedule
overflow
accumulation
attracts pests
health hazards
unsightly appearance
foul odors
quality of life
reliable
frequent
community awareness programs
waste reduction
recycling
community composting solutions
organic waste
installation
public bins
strategic locations
littering
residential bins

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