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The pie charts below compare the proportion of energy capacity in gigawatts (GW) in 2015 with the predictions for 2040. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The pie charts below compare the proportion of energy capacity in gigawatts (GW) in 2015 with the predictions for 2040. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The pie chart gives information about the comparison of
energy
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capacity
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 between 2015 and 2040 with the predicted figure in gigawatts.
Overall
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, it can be clearly seen that the total
energy
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capacity
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 will have approximately doubled in 25 years and some of the
energy
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 from natural resources will experience a significant increase
while
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 the others will decrease somewhat. Looking at the data concerning fossil fuels, we can see that in 2015, the proportion of
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energy
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 accounted for about two-thirds of the total proportion.
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, in 2040, there will be around a one-third decrease in fossil fuels at 44% of the total
capacity
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.
On the other hand
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, regarding the percentage of wind and solar
energy
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 in 2015, each figure was less than 6%.
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, in 2040, the number of wind and solar
energy
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 will have risen dramatically to 18% and 12%, with a ninefold increase and around twice
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 respectively. From the data, it is estimated that natural resources will replace and play an important role in
energy
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 production in 2040. In regards to other renewables and nuclear
energy
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, in 2015 their
energy
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capacity
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 was 23% and 6%. Within 25 years, there will be a slight decline in their usage down to 21% and 5%.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words energy, capacity with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "data" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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