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In some countries, more and more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or building they live in. What are the reasons for this? How can people reasearch this?

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,cause if their home has a historical past they could sell it because it could
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 about the old historical buildings .
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task achievement
Ensure you explain your points clearly and add more detailed examples and context to support your arguments. For instance, provide specific types of historical buildings or more examples of why people may want to research their homes.
coherence
Work on organizing your paragraphs more effectively. Each paragraph should focus on one main idea, with a clear connection to the overall topic. Make sure to transition smoothly between points.
cohesion
Focus on the clarity and accuracy of your grammar and vocabulary. Some spelling mistakes exist which can distract from your message. Aim to proofread for errors in word choice and structure, such as 'coast' instead of 'cost' and 'having' instead of 'haveing'.
content
The use of real-life scenarios, such as social media sharing, is a relevant and relatable example, which helps to engage the reader.

Fully explain your ideas

To get an excellent score in the IELTS Task 2 writing section, one of the easiest and most effective tips is structuring your writing in the most solid format. A great argument essay structure may be divided to four paragraphs, in which comprises of four sentences (excluding the conclusion paragraph, which comprises of three sentences).

For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Genealogy
  • Heritage
  • Preservation
  • Cultural identity
  • Architectural styles
  • Building techniques
  • Historic tapestry
  • Media influence
  • Community engagement
  • Digital archives
  • Historical records
  • Census data
  • Pride of ownership
  • Local historians
  • Historical societies
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