The graph shows data about the annual earnings of three bakeries in Calgary, 2000-2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The line graph gives information about the amount of gains that

Amandine

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Bakery, Mari

Bakeshop

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and Bolo Cakery in Calgary gained, over ten years, from 2000 to 2010.

It is clear that

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the bakeries' revenue is close.

Furthermore

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, the fewest roughly is Bolo Cakery,

while

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the highest in the beginning is Mari

Bakeshop

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Finally

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, the most earnings

at the end

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of the period

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Amandine

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pastry shop. Regarding

Amandine

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Beard Shop, in 2000, it acquired approximately 58 thousand

this

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number continued until 2005.

Then

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, it increased even reach more than 100 thousand in 2010. Mari

Bakeshop

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, began with a high figure compared to

Amandine

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Bakeshop

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, so its gains were about 80000 but it saw rising and decreasing until 2004.

Subsequently

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, it reduced

consequently

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even became 40 thousand in the

last

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two years. On the other side, we can clearly see that Bolo Cakery was the lowest store. In 2000, it is achieved 20000 which much under the others.

However

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, it saw a high increasing year after year. In the

last

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year, its revenues were more than 60000.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "last".

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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words amandine, bakeshop with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

177 words

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