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The graph below shows the percentage of Australian exports to 4 countries from 1990 to 2012

The graph below shows the percentage of Australian exports to 4 countries from 1990 to 2012
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The chart below displays the proportion of
export
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exports
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 by
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Australia
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australia
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Australia
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 to
Japan
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,
US
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the US
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, China and
India
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 from 1990 to 2012
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,
Australia
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 significantly increased their trade with
the
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India
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 and dramatically with
the
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China
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whereas
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maintained
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 their business relatively stable with
Japan
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 and the US
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throughout
thoughout
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throughout
 the time period In 1990,
Australia
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 exported
least
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the least
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 amount of goods to
Japan
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 and
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india
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India
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 by 5% and 2% respectively.
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, the sales
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 to dramatically increase with
Japan
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 and reached
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30% by 2012
and
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India
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also
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 had an increasing rate of goods from
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Australia
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australia
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 over the 25 years by 7% in 2010 and
then
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 had a decline by 2012
Australia
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 had the highest amount of products sold to
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Japan
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 by just over 25% in 1990. but the rate dropped over the next 5 years and
then
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mainted
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maintained
painted
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 a steady
bussiness
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business
 up until 2012. The United
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states
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 where the second largest to receive goods from
Australia
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 by just over 10% but
the
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export
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exports
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was
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significantly declined throughout the entire time period

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Vocabulary: Replace the words australia, japan, india with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decline" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "just over" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "dramatically" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "significantly" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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