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Charts A and B show the share of the UK and Australian cinema market in 2001 and cinema admission in the UK and Australia from 1976 to 2006. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.

Charts A and B show the share of the UK and Australian cinema market in 2001 and cinema admission in the UK and Australia from 1976 to 2006. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
The bar
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 and line
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 give information about the four categories of
films
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 shared
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 two different countries in the movie market by 2001, and the number of movie tickets between 1976 and 2006.
Overall
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, the US
films
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chart
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 has the highest percentage in both countries.
On the other hand
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, the line
chart
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 illustrates a steady increase trend throughout the entire period.
According to
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 the bar
chart
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, it is noticeable that US
films
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shared
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 the biggest market with around 65%.
While
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 the Australian
films
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 had the smallest proportion at about 1%, the US
films
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 in
Australia
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 were 65 times higher than Australian
films
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.
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, the US
films
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 had the highest percentage at nearly 80% in the UK, which was similar to
Australia
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. Meanwhile, it is worth noticing that in the cinema market, the category of others was the only one which had
Australia
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 higher than the UK.
In contrast
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, the line
chart
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 illustrates
Australia
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 increasing continuously
at
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 60
millions
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 during the 25 years.
Additionally
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, the movie ticket
of
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 the UK started with a dramatic drop to the bottom at under 60
millions
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 in 1977,
then
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 gradually climbed to hit a peak at 180
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 in 2003.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words chart, films, australia with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 6 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "illustrates" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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