The graphs below show the information regarding education in singapore between 2002 and 2010.

The graphs below show the information regarding education in singapore between 2002 and 2010.
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The bar and pie charts compare the information regarding the number of
years
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adults spent in schools and the different levels of studies people chose in Singapore in 2002 and 2010.
Overall
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, it is evident that there was no major difference was noticed in the
years
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spent by both genders. The ratio of individuals
studied
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who studied
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university
level
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education and diploma and skill
level
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increased,
whereas
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below secondary and secondary decreased. Looking at the bar graph in more detail, from 2002 to 2006 the number of
years
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studied in school by men and women was between 8 to 9
years
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.
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, in 2008 and 2010, the number of adult males in school was more than adult females recorded
10
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at 10
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and 11 and 10 and 10.5 respectively.
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, the proportion of people who opted
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for university
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university
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university-level
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level
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education in 2002 was 15%, which surged by 13% in 2010. Meanwhile, the percentage of students enrolled in diploma and skill
level
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reached 37% in 2010, which was 19% in 2002. A difference of 19% and 12% was recorded between the ratio of people who studied below secondary
level
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and secondary in 2002 and 2010 noticed 28% or 9% and 38% or 26%
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Vocabulary: Replace the words years, level with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "difference" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "ratio" was used 2 times.
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