Write a letter to your relative. In your letter: • Explain when and how long you will be in town. • Ask whether you can stay at their home. • Offer to pay for yourself.

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Dear I hope

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letter finds you well, I am writing

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letter to inform you that I am thinking about to stay your beautiful city

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for

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my upcoming vacation.As you know I love the spring season most . Because,of it in mid-May I

decide

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have decided

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to visit your home town . I just want to know can,if I stay with you at your home during my visit for two weeks only .I hope you have no problem with my stay over there.I will be there after

mid May

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its

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near

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the 20th and will return in

first

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week of June.If it is possible for you and your family please let me know before my visit. One more thing ,I don't want to stay there free of cost .I will pay room rent and other expenses that I will do there like utilities and car gas . your's truly Raj,

sandhu.raj992Fri Apr 25 2025

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coherence and cohesion

Consider breaking the letter into separate paragraphs for each main point (greeting, introduction, request, and closing). This will enhance clarity.

task achievement

Make sure to include a proper greeting and closing that includes the relative's name and a more formal sign-off.

coherence and cohesion

There are a few grammatical errors; revising for clarity and correctness will strengthen your writing.

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You have included important details about your visit, such as dates and the duration of your stay.

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The informal tone used in addressing your relative makes the letter friendly and personal.

The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

150 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

stay duration
schedule
house rules
financial contribution
expenses incurred
gratitude
eagerness
return visit
flexibility
accommodation

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