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The charts below give information about the amount of time children spent with their parents.

The charts below give information about the amount of time children spent with their parents.
The bar charts compare the proportion of
time
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 which
children
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 interact with their parents during a week.
Overall
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,
while
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 the total amount of
time
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 spent with moms is relatively more among
children
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 during weekdays, both mom and dad were active in dedicating their
time
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 at the weekend. Notably, Dads are very passive in the growth of their
child
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 throughout childhood regardless of the day of the week.
According to
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 weekdays, Fathers spend between 1 and 2
hours
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 until the
child
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 reaches the age of 9.
However
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, mothers are quite kind in separating their
time
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 with their kids with no more than 5 to 6
hours
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 from the birth
time
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 to the age of 9. Interestingly, parents have a tendency to interact less when they are together for about 1 hour during their babyhood with a little increase when the
child
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 gets older, accounting for 2
hours
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 during weekdays. As for weekends, both mom and dad spend 5 to 6
hours
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 every single weekend with their
child
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.
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 mom continues to dedicate more
time
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 to their
children
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 about 2
hours
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 at times, dads are almost uninvolved with their
children
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, accounting for less than 30 minutes except for an age which is 4-5 years old, spending comparatively more
time
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 than others
time
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.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words time, children, child, hours with synonyms.
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