Question You wanted to buy a book from a book store but could not find the book in your city. You want to know if you can get it from the same book store in another city. Write a letter to the manager of the book store. * Explainthe details of the book * Why you need the book * How you would pay for it

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Dear Sir, The purpose of writing is to get information regarding a copy which is not available at bookstores in our city. I have been looking for that particular book for the

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two weeks. But, even after searching in many stores, I was unable to find it. The book I am looking for is "The Conflict Management"- Fifth Edition. It would be a great help if you please get it for me from another city.

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my classes, I am unable to go out of town. I need

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book because I am a student of the Police Foundations course and in one of our courses we have to use that particular edition. The lessons are from the fifth copy and

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, there is new content added. So, I urgently need that edition. If you would arrange it for me, I will be very thankful to you. I shall pay you the amount through e-transfer or PayPal. If you have any other questions, you can contact me at 4379836652. Hoping for your consideration and hearing from you soon Yours Faithfully, XYZ

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task achievement

Consider adding a specific request for how the manager might go about obtaining the book, such as mentioning a city or store where it might be available.

coherence and cohesion

While your ideas are generally clear, ensure that the connection between sections is smooth. Transitioning slightly between your need for the book and your payment method could enhance coherence.

task achievement

Your letter has a clear purpose and directly addresses the need for the book.

coherence and cohesion

The greeting and closing are both polite and appropriate, creating a friendly tone throughout the letter.

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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

183 words

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