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Some people say that in our modern age, it is unnecessary to teach children about the skills of handwriting. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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Nowadays, It is an undeniable fact that teaching handwriting to children has always been a debatable issue. Few citizens think that, In the recent era, it is not at all worth
to educate
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 young borns about the art of handwriting. I
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 with
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 that
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 should be the first step a
children
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 needs to learn after joining
learning
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 institution.
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 with, It is very important for every person to learn the skill of handwriting during the early childhood period
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 because they are going to need
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 talent for
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 of their life. There are several causes
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needs
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, It will help you to express yourself to achieve good grades in
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, to work for any organisation in future, people need to pass various exams to get hired, so
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 particular skill will
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 you
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 that done.
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, In the modern era, people don't have enough time to communicate in person,
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, if you have handwriting skills, you can write a letter to them or leave a note without wasting any time.
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, In
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big organisations, if you write an appreciation letter to a manager or crew lead with good handwriting skills helps you to make
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 impression and
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result
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rewards
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 you sometimes for that kind gesture.
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, handwriting is an asset for every
children
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 or person and
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 skill will
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 you throughout your life, so everyone needs to learn it to reach at peak of glory.

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Avoid repetition and strive for more precise vocabulary.
content
You present a clear opinion on the topic, demonstrating your agreement with the necessity of teaching handwriting.
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You include relevant reasons for your stance, which adds to your argument's persuasiveness.

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    • Sentence 2 - Example
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