The diagram below shows the manufacturing process for making sugar from sugar cane. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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give

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information about

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apply

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the full process of making

sugar

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from

the

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sugar

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cane.

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, the process consists

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7 stages

and

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apply

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this

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starts

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with the

grow

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of

sugar

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canes

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and

it

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ends

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with the cooking and drying of the

sugar

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.

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, people

needs

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that

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the

sugar

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canes

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cane

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grow

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for around 12 to 18 months,

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this

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period they are ready to harvest the plant.

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, they use machines and

knifes

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put off the

sugar

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canes

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cane

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.

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, they take the

sugar

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canes

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cane

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and put it into a machine that

crushing

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crushes

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into

juice

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so,

now

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that now

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is ready to purify

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juice

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into a filter. Eventually, the

purify

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juice

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goes into a container with heat to make the evaporation of the

juice

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,

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,

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juice

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turn

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in

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into

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a

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apply

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syrup. In the

last

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two steps, a centrifuge separates the

sugar

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from

syrup

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the syrup

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.

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, the

sugar

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is put to get cold and dry and, in

this

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final step, is ready.