Students from poor background such as rural areas often find it difficult to access to university education, so people think universities should make it especially easy for them to study at. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
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What works well
2Your essay presents a clear opinion on the topic and follows a logical structure throughout.
The introduction effectively outlines the main points you will discuss, setting a clear framework for your essay.
Improvement Suggestions
2Try to vary your sentence structures and improve the grammatical accuracy of your writing. For example, make sure to use the correct form of verbs and avoid simple errors which can detract from the overall quality.
Expand on your points with more detailed examples and explanations to strengthen the arguments you've made. This will help to provide a clearer and more comprehensive understanding of your stance.
Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Examples make your writing easier to understand by illustrating points more effectively.
Examples, if used properly, not only help you get higher marks for ‘Task Response’ but also for ‘Coherence’.
When giving examples it is best to put them after your main idea or topic sentence. They can be used in the middle of supporting sentences or they can be used to start a new sentence. There is no rule for where exactly to give examples in essays, logically they would come after your main idea/topic sentence or just after a supporting sentence.
Linking words for giving examples:
- for example
- for instance
- to illustrate this
- to give a clear example
- such as
- namely
- to illustrate
- take, for example