Some people think that foreign visitors should be charged more than local when they visit cultural and tourist attractions in a country. To what extent do you agree with this view?

It is true that

tourism

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plays an indispensable role in the economic growth of any

country

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.

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, some individuals have a firm belief that

tourists

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should be charged more when they

are visiting

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any

tourist

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attraction

of

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in

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any

country

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.

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, I

disgree

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disagree

with

this

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notion because I believe that it promotes

the

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ineqality

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inequality

among

tourists

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and

restrict

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restricts

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them

to

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from visiting

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visit

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these costly nations which automatically

worsen

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worsens

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the

econimic

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economic

situation of any

country

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. One of the most

reasons

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of

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for

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disagreement is that

tourism

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will be

effected

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affected

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adversely when

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tourist

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tourists

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feel discriminated

as

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against as

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compare

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compared

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to the locals. Most

of

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apply

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tourist

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destinations are highly dependent upon

tourism

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because they generate revenue for them and improve their infrastructure as well. In

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way, these destinations

able

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to grab the attention of these

tourists

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and encourage them to

visit

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these

places

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. But

by

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apply

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charging high prices for visiting these

places

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from foreigners not only

discourage

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discourages

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them but

also

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create

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creates

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unfairness and inequality in their minds.

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,

tourist

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prefer to find cheap spots to

visit

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instead

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of these

places

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and by the time these

places

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lose their importance.

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, historical values and cultural exchange are only possible when people of other nationalities

visit

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there and understand these norms and traditional values.

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double cost on

tourists

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denied

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denying

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them to

visit

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there and charging more from foreigners may hinder the cultural importance and people will never know their cultural backgrounds.

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, most

of

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apply

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artisians

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artisans

are solely

depend

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on

the

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tourism

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and they spend their whole life on creativity to attract

the

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visitors and insist

them

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they

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to

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buy

souveniors

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souvenirs

souveniers

from them. In

this

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way, they get appreciation and motivation to make their more creative and effective to improve the economic growth of the nation.

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, sometimes charging more is fair enough when the

country

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suffers from

the

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scarcity of resources and basic needs. At that time, people think these foreigners are the only source to improve their living

standard

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standards

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,

infrastructure

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and infrastructure

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and to preserve

the

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historical monuments etcetera.

To sum up

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, Undoubtedly,

tourism

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is capable

to improve

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of improving

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the economic conditions of any

country

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but charging a lot from

tourists

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clearly shows

the

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apply

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discrimination

than

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against

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locals and

discourage

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discourages

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them

to

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from visiting

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visit

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these

places

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and they find other alternatives to spend their vacations

instead

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of going

any

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to any

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expensive destination.