IELTS Writing Correction Service
Writing Samples
Band 5

Your neighbour keeps his animal in his garden and they create problem for you.you have problem with animal.write a letter to your neighbour.describe the problem.suggest the solution.ehat action willyou take if its unsolved.

Dear Mr Smith, I am writing with
a
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great disappointment about the recent damage your dog has done in my garden. Your pet often
cross
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 the fence and
play
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plays
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 in my garden area, everything was fine
untill
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until
last
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 week, when he started thrashing all the flowers in the area, I have
also
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seem
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seen
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 him digging a hole which caused
the
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major damage to all the plants which led to uprooting of few. It would be great if you
can
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 keep him in the designated place using his collar chain, as it would prevent him
to jump
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from jumping
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 and
come
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coming
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 over.
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As well as
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 your pet toy is damaged and he does not enjoy it as much
he
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as he
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use
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 to, so you could consider getting him a new one to increase
him
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his
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 engagement. It is hard to say, if the issue
persist
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 I might have to inform the authorities and file a formal
complain
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 about the future incident. Look forward
for
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to
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 your kind
corporation
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cooperation
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 on
this
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. Yours sincerely, Narender Singh

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coherence and cohesion
Make sure to use appropriate punctuation and conjunctions to improve clarity. For example, replace 'untill' with 'until' and ensure proper sentence structure.
task achievement
Consider addressing the solution more constructively, and clarify the possible actions you would take if the issue is not resolved.
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The letter addresses the issue clearly and offers a possible solution, demonstrating your engagement with the situation.
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The tone of the letter is polite and respectful, which is important in maintaining good neighborly relations.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • disturbance
  • noisy
  • damage
  • health concerns
  • communal living
  • amend
  • neighborly relations
  • solution
  • properly trained
  • confined area
  • fence
  • mediation
  • local authorities
  • concerns
  • issue
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