Some people say that parents have the most important role in a child‘s development. However, others argue that other things like television or friends have the most significant influence. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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pupils play a significant

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in the advancement of their toddlers but on

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side

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others think

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companions

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aspects are more responsible.

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me

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of

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are more important in

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area .

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, social

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is an important aspect which will develop

qualities

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in the

children

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but

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family members

plays

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an irreplaceable

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in the

growth

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of their young one.My views on

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both sides are discussed in the following paragraphs.

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with,

parents

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are the

first

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role

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models of their

kids

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.

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, young

children

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tries

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to the

qualities

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of

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mother or father.To elaborate, a boy of a

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wants to get

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in the police force because

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apply

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he wants to serve the nation as his father

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.

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,

parents

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are like a

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mirror

, where

kids

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wants

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to see

there

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reflection as a future.

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, these all aspects directly affect the

growth

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of the

child

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.

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,a study was conducted by

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Harvard University London which

prooves

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proves

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the fact that nighty five

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per cent

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of the nature of

kids

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is

same

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the same

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as the nature of

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their

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parents

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.Another prominent reason for

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is,

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parents

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that parents

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spend plenty of time with

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kids

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during the

growth

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years of the

children

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.

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,

this

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allows them to help

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their

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kids

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in development and to

adapt

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adopt

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new good

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in

life

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. But

on the other hand

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,

televison

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television

and

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freinds

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friends

are

also

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important

in

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improvement.

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some

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reasons,

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they are less effective.

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,

televison

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television

is a good source of development because it provides

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knowledge

of

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a wide

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variety of

topices

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topics

wheather

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whether

it is related to entertainment,news or sports etc but

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unfortunately

there is some unethical content

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spread

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on

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television at the same time.Certainly, at

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a young

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age

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age,

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it

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is

very difficult for

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kids

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to analyse and it can lead to

adoption

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the adoption

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of bad

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.

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, companions of

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age

also

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play an

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irreplaceable

role

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for

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teh

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the

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child

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growth

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because a person can share anything with his or her

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friend

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,

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freinds

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friends

are

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first

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well wishers

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after

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family members . But on the side , at

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young age

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freinds

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friends

are

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very

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immature

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take

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make

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decisons

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decisions

and they have not faced any hardship in

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early stage of

life

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.

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,

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will lead to limited development of the

child

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.

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, mindset of the some people

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suggests

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that family members

plays

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a significant

role

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in the field of the

growth

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of their

child

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but some

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television and

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freinds

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friends

are more responsible for

growth

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. I agree with

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first

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the first

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statement because

parents

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are the

first

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teachers and

role

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model

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models

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of

there

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their

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young ones.

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this

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,

parents

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have

a

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plenty of experience

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in taking

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care of

there

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their

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children

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and

to develop

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developing

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ethical values in

there

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toddlers.