Food can be produced much more cheaply with the use of improved fertilizers and better machinery However some methods may be dangerous for human health and have negative effect on local communities To what extent do you think its disadvantages over weigh

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recent decades, advancement in every

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can not be denied, as it is proven by improved fertilizer and

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composition is to elaborate on both plus and minus to justify why I believe the methods may be

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for human health and incur negative

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on local

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. Beginning with the meritorious aspects, the foremost is

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human health.

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can contaminate food and water sources, leading to various health

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for

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agricultural

workers. As an illustration, residue on food can have long-term effects that are not immediately apparent. Another pivotal bright side is

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on local

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communities

. when mechanized farming can displace smallholder farmers who cannot afford the new technology. Monoculture, often associated with these methods, can

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reduce biodiversity and the resilience of local ecosystems, impacting traditional livelihoods. Exploring the potential merits, a notable one is increased yield. If farmers can grow more food on the same amount of land, potentially

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a larger population.

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can automate tasks, potentially freeing up human

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for other economic activities.

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applied improved fertilizer and

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income. In conclusion,

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some

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associated with the advancement of fertilizer and

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can affect in the

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detrimental

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on

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community cannot be denied.