You missed an international flight due to a problem at the airport. Write a letter to the airline. In your letter: Describe what happened that caused you to miss your flight Explain how missing your flight impacted you Clearly state what you would like the airline to do You do NOT need to write any addresses.

Dear Sir, I am writing
this
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letter in connection with missing an international
flight
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due to
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a problem at the
airport
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. My
flight
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was from Berlin to France on 16th March from Heer
Airport
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. When I reached the
airport
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the screen of the TV was not functioning properly but on my ticket, its gate number was F. When I got there I noticed that the
flight
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had been missed by me.
Due to
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technical problems, I missed it and on the next day, I had to attend the business meetings.
Moreover
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, there was strict security at the
airport
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so, time was
also
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wasted at that time. Laptops, mobile phones, and clothes were checked separately.
Therefore
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, it was important to check the display of the screens before the announcement of the flights. Since
,
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I missed my
flight
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and I would request the airline team to refund my
flight
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ticket. I would like to hear from you soon! Yours faithfully, Adam

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task achievement
Make sure to clearly describe what led to the problem at the airport and how it affected you personally. You might also want to provide more detail about the urgency of your situation due to the business meetings.
coherence and cohesion
Consider organizing your letter into clear paragraphs: one for the issue, one for its impact, and one for your request to the airline. This will improve the logical flow of your writing.
task achievement
Instead of saying 'I would request the airline team to refund my ticket,' consider using a more polite phrase like 'I would greatly appreciate it if the airline could assist me with a refund for my ticket.'
coherence and cohesion
You have a clear introduction and conclusion in your letter, which is good for reader engagement.
task achievement
You expressed the main issue and your request in a straightforward manner, which makes it easy for the airline to understand your situation.

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite
Topic Vocabulary:
  • check-in counter
  • security clearance
  • departure gate
  • boarding pass
  • airport congestion
  • inconvenience
  • repercussions
  • financial compensation
  • rescheduling
  • itinerary
  • customer service
  • resolution
  • prompt response
  • apology
  • courtesy
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