You have recently started work in a new company. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: Explain why you changed jobs Describe your new job Tell him/her your other news You do NOT need to write any addresses.

Dear Chris, I hope you’re doing well in your life. I have

a exciting news

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exciting news

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for you, I have

shifted

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changed

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job

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! As you’re well aware

that

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apply

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I was over-burdened at my previous

job

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because there was no time schedule for work. Whenever

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my boss called me I had to

pickup

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and

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do the task that he

assigns

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me right away, so that’s why I decided to shift. Now, I’m working in a

multi-national

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company as

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assistant manager,

this

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job

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is quite peaceful

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compared to

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last

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one. I just have to make the marketing strategies

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sitting in my well-furnished office.

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, there

are

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fixed

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number of working hours, and that’s the most lovable part of

this

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job

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Apart from

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this

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, I

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tell you that I’ll be visiting your home to give the invitation

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my sister’s wedding next month. So, tell me what date and time

suites

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suits

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you best. Your friend, Bharat

bharatparashar5672Sat May 03 2025

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coherence and cohesion

Consider using more varied sentence structures to enhance the fluency of your writing.

task achievement

Make sure to proofread your work for small grammatical errors, such as agreement in phrases like 'an exciting news'.

task achievement

You successfully explained your reasons for changing jobs and described your new role quite well.

coherence and cohesion

The letter has a friendly tone, which is appropriate for writing to a friend.

The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Grammar mistakes
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

157 words

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You have recently started work in a new company. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: Explain why you changed jobs Describe your new job Tell him/her your other news You do NOT need to write any addresses.

The Closing

Your Friend wants to send his/her children to your house for the weekend. Write a letter to him/her and say: - Agree to this arrangement - Say what time is suitable for you - Describe what are you planning to do