Today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult, such as the Sahara desert or the Antarctic. What are the benefits and disadvantages for tourist who visit such places?

In recent times tourists are travelling more to
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destinations
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that have adverse conditions, like the Antarctic or the
sahara
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desert. These
destinations
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have some pros,
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at the same
time
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tourists have to face some challenges at these
destinations
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. In the following
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I'll discuss both pros and
corns
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cons
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of these tourist
destinations
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. On the one hand, these
destinations
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have become very attractive for
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tourits
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tourists
these days as these are less explored
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and
due to
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its
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difficult
terrane
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terrain
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provide
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adventure with the
vactions
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vacation
. Talking about the pros, One of the main
advantage
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of these sites is that these are some of the less crowded
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with more peace and
tranquality
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tranquillity
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As now days
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most of the major
destiantions
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destinations
, to name
few
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a few
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like
paris
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, london etc. are very crowded,
hence
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those who are looking for
the
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places for peaceful and
reguvenating
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relaxing
holidays are looking for
these kind
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of unexplored
destinations
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on the other hand
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, harsh weather conditions and low availability of basic facilities are the biggest
challanges
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challenges
in these
destinations
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instance
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harsh cold weather in
Antarctic
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the Antarctic
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sometimes might become fatal and
paucity
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of services like good health care in the case of emergency can become
nightmare
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for the
tourits
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tourists
.
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many
tourits
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tourists
face severe
theats
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threats
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harsh weather at Mouth
everest
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, one of the famous tourist
destination
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. In conclusion, places with adverse conditions have become more popular
amongts
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amongst
among
new
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generation than
the
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conventional tourist
destinations
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,
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however
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they come with their own drawbacks.

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Task Achievement
Ensure that all points are well expanded with clear explanations and include more supporting details where necessary.
Coherence and Cohesion
Consider rephrasing some phrases for clarity and accuracy, and avoid repetitive expressions. Additionally, ensure that all ideas flow logically from one to another.
Task Achievement
Good effort in discussing the benefits and challenges of visiting difficult locations, indicating a comprehensive understanding of the topic.
Coherence and Cohesion
The structure is clear with a defined introduction, body, and conclusion, making it easy to follow.

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general
Topic Vocabulary:
  • adventure
  • unique experiences
  • ecosystems
  • conservation efforts
  • economic benefits
  • environmental degradation
  • habitat destruction
  • safety risks
  • extreme weather conditions
  • navigation
  • high price tag
  • specialized equipment
  • influx
  • strain on local resources
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