The chart below shows the expenditure on three categories among different age groups of residents in the UK in 2004. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the expenditure on three categories among different age groups of residents in the UK in 2004. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The chart below shows the expenditure on three categories among different age groups of residents in the UK in 2004. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart compares how much the UK's nations spent on food and drink, restaurants and hotels and entertainment, people separated into 5 age groups in 2004. It is clearly noticeable that most people of all ages spend the highest amount of their money on their nutrition.
While
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those who are under 30 spend on restaurants and hotels. In the beginning, the youngest group spent about 5% on food and drink and
this
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percentage increased when they became 31-45 years old, it is approximately 13%
then
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it continued rising to 17% for the 46-60 group and 20% for 61-75.
Finally
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, the oldest group aged +76 had more interest in food so they spent about 23% of their total budget on it. For other categories, unexpectedly, people aged 61-75 spent about 23% on entertainment which is a high rate compared to others.
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, under 30 and 31-45 in the United Kingdom are the fewest groups so they spent about only 13% on the same category.

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