You recently went on a business trip and stayed an a hotel.On getting home,you realize you left some things at the hotel.Write a letter to the hotel manager. Details of your stay The items you left behind What you want the manager to do

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to enquire about an item I

have forgotten

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forgot

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to collect, prior to check-out from the hotel. I was late for my flight and did not realize I was missing my event gown that I

have

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had

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requested to be sent to dry clean.

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with, I had made arrangements to stay for three nights at your Hotel, starting from the 1st of October to the 3rd, as I was in the city for an event. I arrived around 1:30 pm checked- in and

then

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passed by the reception to enquiry about the shuttle services available. All over, I had a pleasant stay and the room service was great. Unfortunately, though as I had

over slept

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overslept

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on my

last

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night, I woke up late and was rushing to the airport, that I had forgotten to pick up my

dress

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. I had requested the hotel receptionist to send my

dress

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to the laundry, since the

dress

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is made of a delicate type of fabric and was informed that it

will

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would

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be ready within a day. The gown is a long sleeveless blue coloured

dress

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, with golden buttons

that

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is extending

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extend

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to the back and

have

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apply

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mesh like

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mesh-like

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layer

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a layer

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which is white in

color

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colour

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on the upper part of the

dress

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. I would appreciate

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it if

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you could send me the gown via courier service to

this

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location 125 Well Street

bluiding

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building

no. 5 first floor. You can contact me via email

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[email protected], for any

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additionally

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additional

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information if required. Thank you for

continuous

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your continuous

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assistance and

lookin

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looking

forward to hearing from you soon. Yours faithfully, Moh Has

dr.waffa1459Sun May 04 2025

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task achievement

Clarify the timeline of your stay and checkout to emphasize urgency.

coherence and cohesion

Consider breaking up the second paragraph into smaller parts for better readability.

coherence and cohesion

Proofread for minor grammatical issues, such as 'enquiry' (should be 'inquiry') for consistency with American English usage if that's your preference.

positive

The letter has a polite and formal tone, which is appropriate for this type of correspondence.

positive

You clearly detailed the item left behind and provided a vivid description, which assists the manager in identifying it easily.

Word Count

IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 150 words in writing task 1. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.

A very long letter will not give you a higher band score.

Aim for between 160 to 190 words in writing task 1. This will ensure a concise letter and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 20 minutes to write the letter and you need around 5 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long letter in 15 minutes.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
1
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
15
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

271 words

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You recently went on a business trip and stayed an a hotel.On getting home,you realize you left some things at the hotel.Write a letter to the hotel manager. Details of your stay The items you left behind What you want the manager to do

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