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The graph below shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in one country between 2011 and 2018. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in one country between 2011 and 2018. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Tha
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The
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 line chart provides information about the
amount
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number
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 of shops which
clised
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closed
 and the
amount
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number
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 of new shops which opened in
specific
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the specific
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country
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countries
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from
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between
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 20011 and 2018.The units are measured in thousands.
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,It is clear from the graph that the number of shops which closed over the period has

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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
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