The two bar charts below show the proportion of 14-to 16-year-old students studying a foreign language in an English speaking country, and the top three foreign languages. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

IELTS Writing Task Chart for The two bar charts below show the proportion of 14-to 16-year-old students studying a foreign language in an English speaking country, and the top three foreign languages. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The first bar chart compares the percentage of male and female student who study another foreign

language

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with their mother's

language

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which is English. The second chart illustrates the difference between the performance of each foreign

language

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In 1984 and 2007.

It is clear that

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the rate of girls is more than boys by noticeable percentages in both years.

Whereas

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, regarding the 3 languages, French was the most studied

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. In 1984, about 50% of girls studied another

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In contrast

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, boys were only 30%. Unexpectedly, the whole numbers decreased by 2007. Girls' percentage has fallen by 10% and boys' has fallen by approximately 5%.

According to

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the second chart,

language

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performance did not change over the years. So, French is the highest with 50% in 1984, and 35% in 2007, these are high percentages compared to German and Spanish.

However

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, the two languages have increased in 2007. which is German was 20%

then

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became 24%.

In addition

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, Spanish was less than 5% the became 10%.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

166 words

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