The table below presents the number of children ever born to women aged 40-44 years in Australia for each year the information was collected since 1981

The table below presents the number of children ever born to women aged 40-44 years in Australia for each year the information was collected since 1981
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The table below presents the number of children ever born to women aged 40-44 years in Australia for each year the information was collected since 1981
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howmany
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how many
children
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was
bourned
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burned
born
in Australia
whoes
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whose
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mother’s
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mothers
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was between four different
yesars
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years
(1981,1986,1996,2006) . With a glance
to
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at
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table
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, the percentage of 40-44 mothers with having 3,4 or more
children
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had
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decline
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declined
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since 1981.
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, the number of mothers who had none,one or two
children
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rised
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raised
rise
rose
during
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period. As the table shows,
it is clear that
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amount of mothers
wanted
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who wanted
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to have
three
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and
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or
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more
children
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got
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decreased.The most number of
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is in 1981 for
three
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, four and more
children
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( 17.4% and 27.6%)
whereas
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,
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of women who wanted to have
experience
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the experience
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of having
three
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and more
children
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got less a lot year by year until 2006 (21.5% for 3
children
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and 11% for more than 3
children
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).
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the number of
weman
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women
woman
choosed
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chose
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having
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to have
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more than two
children
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in the primary years of
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period,
an
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the
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amount of
weman
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women
who
prefered
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prefer
to have less than
three
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children
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had
undeniable
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increase since 1981. Despite
of
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this
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rise from 1996 to
2006
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2006,
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the population of women who prefer to be a mom for two
children
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increase
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increased
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a bit from 38.2% to 38.3%.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words children, three with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "rised" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • fertility rate
  • demographic shift
  • age cohort
  • workforce implications
  • government policy
  • birth rate fluctuations
  • education level
  • career advancement
  • reproductive health
  • family planning
  • socio-economic factors
  • population pyramid
  • life expectancy
  • childbearing age
  • maternity leave
  • contraceptive methods
  • population growth rate
  • average family size
  • maternal health
  • census data
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