The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given diagram shows the full process for
recycle
Change the verb form
recycling
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plastic
bottles
Use synonyms
and how could we use
this
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material to make new products.
Overall
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, in
this
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process
Add a comma
process,
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there are nine different stages and it is a circle diagram because starting with
bottles
Use synonyms
in the trash and ending with new products made with that waste. In the first part of
this
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process, we need the trash, specifically, plastic
bottles
Use synonyms
. The trash truck takes
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this
Correct determiner usage
these
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bottles
Use synonyms
and gives
it
Correct pronoun usage
them
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to the recycling centre where workers check if they can recycle the
bottle
Fix the agreement mistake
bottles
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.
In addition
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, in those factories, they use
Linking Words
this
Correct determiner usage
these
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bottles
Use synonyms
to
compat
Correct your spelling
compact
into blocks and
then
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put
it
Correct pronoun usage
them
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in a machine to crush
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this
Correct determiner usage
these
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blocks and wash the material. As
follow
Correct subject-verb agreement
follows
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, one of those machines
turn
Correct subject-verb agreement
turns
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the waste into plastic pellets and with
heat
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heat,
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they make a raw material.
Finally
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, with
this
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new material people can make different kinds of products
such
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as t-shirts, pencils, bags,
even
Correct word choice
and even
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,
bottles
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.
Then
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, the cycle starts again.

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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 71%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words bottles with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "diagram" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Recycling process
  • Disposal
  • Collection
  • Sorting
  • Cleaning
  • Contaminants
  • Recycling center
  • Plastic flakes
  • Melting
  • Re-shaping
  • Raw materials
  • Transformation
  • Repurposing
  • End products
  • Variety
  • Sustainability
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