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The two maps illustrate the development of the town of Felixstone between 1967 and 2001.

The two maps illustrate the development of the town of Felixstone between 1967 and 2001.
The maps demonstrate the town of
Felixstone
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Felixstowe
 in 1967 and 2001.
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,
Felixstone
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Felixstowe
 experienced
conversion
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 of the
agriculture
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 land and marine structure into amenities. In the past,there was a road
went
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that went
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 through
middle
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the middle
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 of the city. Above it, the farmland is situated and on
the
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apply
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both
side
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sides
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 of the high street,two rows of
the
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apply
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shop
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shops
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, which
was
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are
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then
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one
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of
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them
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replaced
to
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 apartments
placed
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.
Farmland
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had
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has
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 undergone
same
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the same
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 progress by
converted
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being converted
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 into
resort
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the resort
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 which contain
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hotel
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a hotel
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 swimming pool, tennis courts,
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hotel
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and hotel
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.
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, golf
course
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courses
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,
forest
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forests
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, and dunes manage to maintain throughout
years
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the years
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.
Although
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the hotel
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hotel
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hotels
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 and
cafe
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cafes
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 were
no
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not
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 touched,
location
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the location
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 of those facilities moved upward to the road.
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car
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the car
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 park and wind turbines settled bottom of the
hotel
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 and dunes respectively, marine structures,
which
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apply
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located
top
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on top
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 of the sea,including
fish
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a fish
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 market , marina, and pier transformed into
beach
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a beach
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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
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Introduction: Change the first sentence in the introduction.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words hotel with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Only 2 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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