Writing a letter to your friend about inviting him on a holiday trip

Add the punctuation

Hi,

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Abduvali I hope

this

Linking Words

letter

will find

Wrong verb form

finds

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you well.I am pleased to inform you that you invited to the event of

holiday

Add an article

a holiday

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trip.

This

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occasion will be organized

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apply

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near

mountain

Correct article usage

the mountain

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to our city.And held on Saturday At 9 am.A meal will be provided in the middle of the process to make it more enjoyable.

Firstly

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, it's a great

honor

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honour

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for me to invite

such

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a person like you as you are so important

for

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me, and I would like to say that spending

all

Correct determiner usage

apply

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the trip with you is so enjoyable.

Secondly

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, I have

also

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it found useful to inform you that

trip

Correct article usage

a trip

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Add an article

the mountain

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mountain

Fix the agreement mistake

mountains

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such

Linking Words

as useful like fruits and vegetables as important to our healthy

Furthermore

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, other good news is that having a time

the

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on the

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mountain is absolutely free. Please confirm your availability on or before we have gone until the occasion officially starts.

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closing

Make sure to include a clear closing statement, expressing your anticipation for your friend's response.

tone

You have a warm and inviting tone, which is great for a friendly letter!

details

You mentioned the details of the trip, specifying the time and location, which is important for informing your friend.

The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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6
Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
12
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

<4

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

149 words

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Writing a letter to your friend about inviting him on a holiday trip

The Closing

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