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The pie chart shows the browser usage on wikimedia for the year 2011. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The pie chart shows the browser usage on wikimedia for the year 2011. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie chart provides a detailed representation of browser
usage
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 on Wikimedia for December 2011, highlighting the users’ preferences.
Overall
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, Internet Explorer was the most popular option, followed closely by Firefox and Chrome,
while
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 using less popular
browsers
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,
such
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 as Opera and Android, was notably minimal.
To begin
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 with, Internet Explorer held a significant market share, accounting for 29.15% of total
usage
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. Mozilla Firefox followed with 23.5%, showing a strong preference for these two web
browsers
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.
Although
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 not as popular, Google Chrome contributed a substantial 22.2%
total
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usage
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. As can be seen, these three renowned
browsers
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 dominated, collectively representing a large portion of the market.
In contrast
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, the remaining
browsers
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 had considerably smaller shares. Safari, with a
usage
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 rate of 12.52%, revealed a moderate level of popularity,
whereas
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 Opera accounted for merely 5.3%.
Additionally
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 'Other' captured 4.46%, and the Android browser was at just 2.87%. These figures underline a stark contrast between the leading
browsers
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 and the lesser-used alternatives.

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